Post by Dennie on Aug 30, 2017 10:21:12 GMT -7
I couldn't even finish this. I read one chapter and I hated it.
The heroine meets the hero, her mate from the title, then the same day she is having a one night stand with some random dude from a bar. Then we have a flashback from the H POV where he is having an orgy with 3 females. Then we flash forward to see the hero watching the heroine with her one night stand and getting so hot he just has to efff about 8 women in ONE NIGHT in an orgy in the park. This is not how I think mates should act esp if they have MET each other!!!!!!
The heroine meets the hero, her mate from the title, then the same day she is having a one night stand with some random dude from a bar. Then we have a flashback from the H POV where he is having an orgy with 3 females. Then we flash forward to see the hero watching the heroine with her one night stand and getting so hot he just has to efff about 8 women in ONE NIGHT in an orgy in the park. This is not how I think mates should act esp if they have MET each other!!!!!!
This is the second DNF from me for this author.
